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Post by Deleted on Mar 25, 2014 20:42:39 GMT
Because why not.
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A window; clear as crystal and sharp as a sword, Scenery; branching out, a jewelled hoard.
The glass is full. Each drop stretches for miles, Twisting and turning.
A country lies still. Millions of lives stop, save one; As I lie awake, my insides burning.
Why won't you let me go? Gripping my conscience between two withered hands. It can't be long before they're returning.
They're black as night, And inherently unique, Yet my mind is still learning.
Drip. Drip. Drip.
And the surface is still so clear, Lying in a thousand pieces there and here. -------------------------------
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Post by comicforce on Mar 26, 2014 7:22:49 GMT
Oh wow, so good Amelia.
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Post by LdySpace on Mar 31, 2014 4:03:59 GMT
Wow, that's amazing. Truly.
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Post by spiderman on Mar 31, 2014 22:54:10 GMT
Wow this is fantastic. You're really good at this. please please write more.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 1, 2014 15:43:14 GMT
Thank you guys for your lovely replies I might write more in the future, if I get the time and inspiration. If anyone else has any poems they've written, I'd love to hear them!
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Post by comicforce on Apr 2, 2014 12:02:11 GMT
I'm not a poet. I can't even write limericks! Lol so pretty in awe right now.
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Post by LdySpace on Apr 3, 2014 4:08:43 GMT
I wish I could offer something other than 'There once was a man from Nantucket....', and that's not even original, but alas, I have no talent for this sort of thing. I really do love reading everyone else's talents very much, though.
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Post by comicforce on Apr 3, 2014 6:23:26 GMT
Hey at least you CAN do limericks! LOL.
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Post by TraceOddity on Apr 5, 2014 0:43:43 GMT
There once was a Coldplayer named Sam. Who didn't like bacon or ham. And sausage and beef caused him such grief. So he had to settle for SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM SPAM!!!!!!!
SPAM.
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Post by LdySpace on Apr 5, 2014 2:28:02 GMT
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Post by TraceOddity on Apr 5, 2014 2:37:07 GMT
Classic!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 5, 2014 9:12:52 GMT
I was waiting for someone to post that sketch
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Post by comicforce on Apr 5, 2014 14:24:48 GMT
Me too! Wonderful..
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Post by Deleted on Apr 17, 2014 18:26:57 GMT
I got bored And yup, I based this on my fanfiction… haha that's a bit sad now I think about it -------------------- My arms shake and I know, It'll soon be over, Watch it all go, Like a brother to a brother, My hands will draw your blood, Kill me quick and slow, I'll send rain for the flood, We'll all be drowned in deep brown mud. Between heaven and hell, I'll meet you on the other side, Of that wall, so cold, an empty shell, I'm numb, dazed, asleep and dead, Bitter, resentful, fierce and dark, My head won't smash enough, For the pieces to build an ark, I'll save you when I hear the lark. I'm not afraid of what you'll say, I'll still sleep at night, And live the day, The roots I'll dig and the branch I'll break, The leaves I'll keep so they don't stray, The sky will fall and the seas will rise, My enemies will be kept at bay, I'm going a world and a stone's throw away. --------------------
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Post by Deleted on Apr 18, 2014 23:45:24 GMT
---------- I'll lie tonight, Die tonight, Sit and watch the sky tonight, Sing tonight, Grow wings tonight, Wildflowers spring tonight, Leap tonight, They'll weep tonight, 'Cause I know I'll never sleep tonight.
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I'll let my heart pour out and my insides burst, I guess I'd better live but I'd rather die first, My spine and bones shiver up and down, I should probably swim but it's quicker to drown, I'm falling like a bird with a broken wing, I'll never fly again, nor will I sing, This would be the end if it weren't for the stars, Tonight they're mine alone, not ours, I'll watch until I'm awake no more, It can't be long 'till the angels fall.
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