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Post by comicforce on Mar 20, 2014 13:20:05 GMT
Lol!
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Post by spiderman on Mar 21, 2014 2:29:49 GMT
Hey guys, I recorded Dancing In The Rain. I did 2 takes, I'll post them here. Decide which is better haha. My voice has felt a little off these past few days. It felt actually kinda difficult to find the right pitch and get in tune(somewhat). So bear with me, the vocals aren't great. I'll post them once they're done uploading.
Edit: Both recordings suck.
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Post by spiderman on Mar 21, 2014 4:53:56 GMT
This one's personal.
Instincts
When you've seen the sun set From one end to the other Would you believe in finding another Through the chaos you saw the end And now you're starting over again
What would you think Call it Instincts Saving yourself when everything you know has gone wrong What would they think Call it Instincts Saving yourself in the night darkest Before the dawn
The road's hardest to walk When it's all uphill And gravity's working against you Find someone to talk Who'll listen still And help you with everything you've been through
What would you think Call it Instincts Saving yourself when everything you know has gone wrong What would they think Call it Instincts Saving yourself in the night darkest Before the dawn
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Post by comicforce on Mar 21, 2014 7:23:20 GMT
You're really REALLY good at this!
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Post by warningsign42 on Mar 22, 2014 2:05:32 GMT
^ This. Keaton you are amazing at songwriting, I must say. And I really like that one. Inspired by Neutral Milk Hotel: Running Through a Darkened Tunnel Its a beautiful night when I swallow the light Put cellophane all 'round the sun Watch the thinning breeze as it circles the trees Turns the knots I've tied all undone Such a wonderful mistake that beckons to break The heart whose wounds I have sewn What a horrible case, you who's watching my face As it melts into the things I don't know And you - softly speak Words are begging me - dont believe It's a terrible noise, echoes through the floors The most beautiful sound I've ever heard And I look at the stage as you fly through an age You are speaking but you don't say a word And you - softly read My thoughts are begging me - don't breathe I'm begging you - don't take the path that's been pathed I'm begging you - don't rip the wire that's been frayed You're begging me - but I believe You're begging me - but i breathe I breathe
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Post by comicforce on Mar 22, 2014 11:31:06 GMT
This is VERY good too. Seriously, if you don't record them, release them as a self-published book of poetry.. So good.
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Post by spiderman on Mar 23, 2014 1:48:19 GMT
Oh thank you haha. James I love it! I like how you break the usual song barrier and just write what comes to mind. Pure poetry. This one would probably sound good. You've been writing some good songs lately. They're really good. Here's another one. Just wrote it in the moment. The topic has been on my mind recently. No clue why. I'm working(kinda) on a small little album(ish) inspired by Ghost Stories. Not by the low key sound, but by the themes and lyrics. I wrote a song earlier today called, "An Ocean Full Of Stars". It feels like a total rip off. I love it but sadly, it will not see the light of day! Taboo
I've sold my soul To the dark side of the world Turned a blind eye To everything in life To see something different A road high or low I don't know But it feels, it steals, my heart In total abandonment To the ascent I'm only skin and bone Looking for my ambient unknown
Stomach turning Fire burning No returning Only one way to go One light to see For better or worse It's not a curse It's just the way it has to be..
edit: Just recorded this. Didn't warm up my voice but oh well, wanted to record it.
soundcloud.com/lifeoftechnicolor/taboo
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Post by spiderman on Mar 23, 2014 3:20:30 GMT
The Horizon And Back
Those eyes of hers Won't let me go They hide something I don't know And I yes I Will throw Caution to the wind
In an ocean full of stars (an ocean full of stars) We'll be who we are (We'll be who we are)
I'm the sky and you're the rain You won't slip through my hands again You flirt with danger and dance with death I'm no stranger but I'm obsessed
Call it true When I'm with you Must be something From above Call it true When I'm with you Or maybe it's love Love..love
Ooh ooh ooh
We'll be who we are
(We'll be who we are)
In an ocean full of stars
(an ocean full of stars)
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Post by comicforce on Mar 23, 2014 9:39:15 GMT
Brilliant. This new record has inspired a lot of us. I am inspired to get my photoshop out and try and create something arty.. Would either of you object if I used your lyrics within the picture? They are lovely.
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Post by spiderman on Mar 23, 2014 23:15:54 GMT
It would be an honor.
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Post by warningsign42 on Mar 23, 2014 23:31:38 GMT
Yes I'd be perfectly fine with that
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Post by comicforce on Mar 23, 2014 23:34:42 GMT
Awww thanks guys. I am working on something now. I will let you see it tomorrow when it's done. Although if you're like me, it's never really done.. there is always something you look at and think.. wish I'd done this or that.
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Post by comicforce on Mar 24, 2014 0:11:07 GMT
I lied.. I finished it. Thanks for the lyrics, I think they fit perfectly. Link to full size LINK TO FULL SIZESorry it's huge!
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Post by spiderman on Mar 24, 2014 0:21:06 GMT
Wow that's beautiful! :awesome: Row that really is amazing! Speechless haha.
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Post by warningsign42 on Mar 24, 2014 1:05:28 GMT
That's amazing! Beautiful job!
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