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Post by spiderman on Feb 13, 2014 4:10:36 GMT
For those who like to write short stories, music, poems, or anything else.
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Post by warningsign42 on Feb 14, 2014 17:36:36 GMT
Woo let's get this thread going! Here's a song I wrote a few days ago, probably a little too wordy but here it is anyway:
Why?
You wait motionless, blocking out the sun You wait until my thread has come undone Your warnings went unheeded In the darkness with the lights defeated Because no one ever told you when to run
When I see nothing but the water Flowing brought my open mind I want to let you know that I am fine
When you create a wall of fire Blinding, mountains that I climb I want to let you know that I am fine
You stand fearlessly building up the pain It echoes through the sheets of pouring rain You are so cold, controlled and glowing On and on the waters flowing And you don't even try to make the change
(Instrumental Break)
Why am I fighting Why am I fighting for you I just keep igniting So why am I fighting for you
I am free as free can be, flying in a cage It's not my life, it's not my day and age The waters are receding My shattered heart continues bleeding And you have yet to turn the page
Now I hear nothing but the paper Flying round my empty brain I'll tell you that I cannot feel the pain
Now I see nothing but the water Speeding through my open mind Still I want to tell you I am fine
Why am I fighting Why am I fighting for you I just keep igniting Why am I fighting for you
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Post by spiderman on Feb 14, 2014 18:09:19 GMT
That's very descriptive James. I like it! You could picture it all. It will be good I'll bet.
Here's one. Mind you, I'm getting over a cold. So I won't sound good!
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Post by warningsign42 on Feb 14, 2014 18:40:50 GMT
I really like that one! Especially the "1 2 3 4" part And no cold can stop you. You're Spider-Man after all... :P
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Post by spiderman on Feb 14, 2014 19:37:13 GMT
Thanks..I don't know why I said that lol. Yeah!... I am! haha.
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Post by comicforce on Feb 14, 2014 21:10:02 GMT
The poem reminds me of England right now.. ALL that water.. LOL. Seriously though I them both lot.
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Post by LdySpace on Feb 14, 2014 21:53:07 GMT
Excellent work guys. I wish I had a creative bone in my body. Excellent.
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Post by spiderman on Feb 14, 2014 21:57:38 GMT
Aww thanks. We try, oftentimes we miss. James! We should write a song called Buckin!!
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Post by LdySpace on Feb 14, 2014 22:09:47 GMT
I think you have just given yourselves your next assignment. Get crackin'!
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Post by spiderman on Feb 14, 2014 22:24:23 GMT
Buckin The truth is There's no one like you The truth is There's nothing you can't do You're a runner Who never stops running And your soul, never stops glowing Your eyes, as deep as the sea Your ways, as perfect as symmetry I'm gonna take you back And never let go You changed me for the better I believe you already know Oh this feeling of love In a lethal dose Has got me dreaming of you the most Oh this feeling has got me dreaming..of you The truth is There's no one like you The truth is There's nothing you can't do Will you let me hold the reins And come alive tonight As you sing me to sleep in ocean tides Oh this feeling of love In a lethal dose Has got me dreaming of you the most Oh this feeling, has got me dreaming Has me feeling and dreaming of you the most This is all I have so far. Its a work in progress. Second verse needs more. Feel free to add more as you see fit. edit: The chorus seems like the only good part of it... hmmmm edit 2: I'll work on it when I get home from work tonight.
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Post by warningsign42 on Feb 14, 2014 22:58:03 GMT
I'll gladly help you out with that one when I get back from dinner! Lol This'll be a smash hit :P and thanks guys we try our best
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Post by spiderman on Feb 17, 2014 4:19:18 GMT
Green Eyes(for lack of a better name)
(This is my attempt at a country song)
Capo 1(Cause I sing falsetto :P )
D, A(sus), Bm, G
You and me and I believe There's so much we can achieve Beauty lies in ocean tides Glowing sapphire luminous eyes Together me and you Nothing will come through Together me and you There's nothing we can't do
Take this heart and make it beat again Take these eyes and turn them green Make this skin and bone the best you've ever seen Let me be the one with you until the end
I saw you laying on a balcony A thousand leagues under the sea You are the one I want to love And our passion will rise above We won't live forever So hear me say You won't ever have to walk alone Cause you're a sanctuary I call home
Take this heart and make it beat again Take these eyes and turn them green Make this skin and bone the best you've ever seen Let me be the one with you until the end
Take this heart and make it beat again Take these eyes and turn them green Make this skin and bone the best you've ever seen Let me be the one with you until the end
This song is going to be good. I can feel it. I already love playing it.
Love In The Name Of Life
There's no better feeling Than love's natural healing I'll take your hand and hold it close You're my solace that gives me hope In times of dark and in times of doubt You are the sun that always comes out
I will live life in the name of love Cause you're the light than shines from above
To live with acquiesce Is to walk on with regrets Everyday is a new start Together we stand, never apart Ooh Ooh Ooooh I know you're worth fighting for Cause I believe you're something more
I will live life in the name of love
Cause you're the light than shines from above
This 2nd one is alright. Feels repetitive.
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Post by comicforce on Feb 17, 2014 7:14:57 GMT
Nice, are you going to duet with Gwyneth on that?
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Post by spiderman on Feb 17, 2014 14:28:18 GMT
Nice, are you going to duet with Gwyneth on that? If she lets me, I hope so! :p
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Post by spiderman on Feb 17, 2014 14:34:16 GMT
Nice, are you going to duet with Gwyneth on that? If she lets me, I hope so! :p She said that if she wasn't available, to call you and ask you to duet with me, in a very proper American way.
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