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Post by comicforce on Aug 26, 2018 17:22:19 GMT
Listening now. I can see you as the next Avicci.. although please stay with us longer.. I love it Lax.
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laxwatcher
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Post by laxwatcher on Sept 30, 2018 2:46:20 GMT
Thanks Row! Here's to more music!!! Metamorphosis (Preview): instaud.io/2K3W
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Post by spiderman on Oct 1, 2018 2:17:36 GMT
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Post by comicforce on Oct 1, 2018 19:17:30 GMT
Hey, that's an interesting sound Keaton. What is the percussion you are using? I like the song, just not sure about the percussion though? But I guess it's a demo? But our voice is great when you sing loud Keaton. Go for it. I like it. You need to reach for the higher register. Just my opinion. You are very good. Nice song.
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laxwatcher
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Post by laxwatcher on Oct 1, 2018 19:29:34 GMT
Hey all, Thanks again for listening to my music, I really appreciate it. I have a new track that I'm almost done with that I want to release soon. I'm deciding on a name for it...which will also affect if I write lyrics or find old recordings to overlay. Update: I think I might call it "Embers" - with reference to memories and the past Hope you like it! Embers: instaud.io/2KsJ
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Post by spiderman on Oct 2, 2018 19:29:11 GMT
Hey, that's an interesting sound Keaton. What is the percussion you are using? I like the song, just not sure about the percussion though? But I guess it's a demo? But our voice is great when you sing loud Keaton. Go for it. I like it. You need to reach for the higher register. Just my opinion. You are very good. Nice song. Thanks Row! The percussion is actually me slapping the guitar, in a very Ed Sheeran-esque way. I've been trying to do different stuff for a while but haven't had much luck. This is a breath of fresh air. I will try to reach that higher register, but lately I haven't been able to sing very well.
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Post by comicforce on Oct 3, 2018 17:36:48 GMT
Well I think it worked for you when you did Keaton. Just sing LOUDLY.. (Like I can talk or Sing LOL!)..
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joiedevivre
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Post by joiedevivre on Oct 6, 2018 1:09:34 GMT
I had to say it....
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Post by spiderman on Oct 7, 2018 15:03:09 GMT
Right Girl
(I) Don't know what you're thinking (I)) Don't know what you're feeling Cause I just want to tell you Nothing but the whole truth Sitting on a park bench Not thinking about revenge I just want to hold you Like the days I used to But..
But you think that I'm not right girl That you'll find him in this world But you just lost your mind girl I thought I was your world Now you picked a different guy girl So I'll sleep alone tonight for sure Yeah I'll sleep alone tonight for sure
Don't know what you're saying Don't know what you're praying Now I just want to let go Push you out my mind no Your hand locked in my hand Can't you take me as am? I've been waiting for you But those days have passed too
But you think that I'm not right girl That you'll find him in this world But you just lost your mind girl I thought I was your world Now you picked a different guy girl So I'll sleep alone tonight for sure Yeah I'll sleep alone tonight for sure So I'll sleep alone tonight for sure Yeah I'll sleep alone tonight for sure
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Post by spiderman on Oct 8, 2018 16:06:19 GMT
Stronger in Faith
[Verse 1] Is anybody listening? Is anybody feeling down? These are the days that we need That We need the sun to come out So we're holding on to faith But somehow we still lost our way On your knees you try to pray Somewhere in the dark and grey
[Bridge] I'm feeling something in my bones And I can't shake it off I know We try so hard to let this go But maybe it's time to say this so
[Chorus] I feel my heart it's racing out my chest and I don't know what to say I won't give up while I'm still breathing Cause I can see the light of day I think of love now when I'm bleeding I'm not so easy for you to break You can try to tear me down But I'm so much stronger in my faith
[Verse 2] Pretty soon you hit the bottom And you've no where left to go With Seven billion people But still you feel all alone But love, life, laughter, joy All these things that we enjoy Faith can be a great many things Whatever keeps you hoping Love or life, God or a smile Keeps us sane for a little while
[Chorus] I feel my heart it's racing through my chest and I don't know what to say I won't give up while I'm still breathing Cause I can see the light of day I think of love now when I'm bleeding I'm not so easy for you to break You can try to tear me down But I'm so much stronger in my faith
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Post by LdySpace on Oct 9, 2018 15:12:37 GMT
I feel so much emotion from these lyrics, Keaton.
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Post by comicforce on Oct 13, 2018 9:40:50 GMT
Definitely. Your lyrics are just getting better and better Keaton.
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laxwatcher
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Post by laxwatcher on Oct 14, 2018 3:21:43 GMT
*raises hand
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Post by spiderman on Oct 27, 2018 0:24:21 GMT
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Post by spiderman on Oct 29, 2018 4:25:12 GMT
[Verse 1] I never thought something Could mean so much When I'm staring you in the eyes And the thought about fiction And books as our truth We always believed in the lies
[Chorus] And it's never too late To say how you feel Cause our days here are numbered and real And these are the days That we hold onto truth So we run till we learn to believe
[Verse 2] I should say something important right now But I'm struggling to find the words The look on my face might fill you with doubt But if there's one thing I know in this world
[Chorus] And it's never too late To say how you feel Cause our days here are numbered and real And these are the days That we hold onto truth So we run till we learn to believe
[Bridge] If this is the moment That I've waited for Then nothing is better than this So if this is the end To a beautiful journey It was always worth the risk
[Chorus] And it's never too late To say how you feel Cause our days here are numbered and real And these are the days That we hold onto truth So we run till we learn to believe So we run till we learn to believe So we run till we learn to believe Yeah I run till I learn to believe
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