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Post by spiderman on Mar 15, 2014 3:37:29 GMT
James that's brilliant! I love the first verse! It's fantastic! This is one of your best. I'm calling it now! Haha. Thanks. I just stumbled across this video, got inspired to write this.
Love Through The Chaos
Another day gone by Since we stood atop the world Time passing us by And we can't slow it down Let us open our eyes And see through this disguise So tomorrow we'll fly
Leave the start and go deep within your heart Don't let the world cut you down to size There's so much to see if you open your eyes
From above! Through the chaos! There's love!! Fighting till the end!
Days moving faster now Seconds ticking away Make every moment count We will find a way Have no doubt the sun will come out
Leave the start and go deep within your heart Don't let the world cut you down to size There's so much to see if you open your eyes
From above! Through the chaos! There's love!! Fighting till the end!
From above! Through the chaos! There's love!! Fighting till the end!
Don't let the world cut you down to size There's so much to see if you open your eyes Don't let the world cut you down to size There's so much to see if you open your eyes Don't let the world cut you down to size There's so much to see if you open your eyes..
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Post by spiderman on Mar 17, 2014 3:07:57 GMT
James, remember the song we said we'd write? I hope you like this. Feel free to add correct or change. <3 Close your eyes, and drift away Sail the ocean, all night and day The sky is full, full of stars Glowing... In the rain, Taking flight Comes a distant, blinding light Your heart will show The way you need to go What happens next only you know.. Your heart will show.. The way you need to go.. The way you need to go.. The way you need to go.. What happens next only you know.. With the new IOS 7.01, my notes section doesn't crash anymore so I can use it again . I ket your part in it without messing with it. I rewrote my bit though because the lyrics before were rubbish.
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Post by spiderman on Mar 17, 2014 3:16:10 GMT
James, remember the song we said we'd write? I hope you like this. Feel free to add correct or change. <3 Close your eyes, and drift away Sail the ocean, all night and day The sky is full, full of stars Glowing... In the rain, Taking flight Comes a distant, blinding light Your heart will show The way you need to go What happens next only you know.. Your heart will show.. The way you need to go.. The way you need to go.. The way you need to go.. What happens next only you know.. With the new IOS 7.01, my notes section doesn't crash anymore so I can use it again . I kept your part in it without messing with it. I rewrote my bit though because the lyrics before were rubbish.
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Post by spiderman on Mar 17, 2014 10:49:20 GMT
Can't sleep..
Ghost Chant
In the shadows, of darkness And the burning at(of) midnight Echo-o from bleeding out The silence, will explode Release the wolf, calling out
Feel your heart, beating faster Going nowhere, only A speeding ghost Basking with the thunder Just close your eyes And fall...(asleep) close your eyes And fall...(asleep)
Ooh-ooh-ooh
Just close your eyes And fall...(asleep) close your eyes And fall...(asleep)
Close your eyes And fall...(asleep) Close your eyes And fall...(asleep)
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Post by comicforce on Mar 17, 2014 20:10:59 GMT
Nice! reminds me a little of Chinese Sleep chant at the end there. Sort of a Midnight/Chinese Sleep Chant crossover. Which I guess, given the title is what you intended! LOL..
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Post by spiderman on Mar 17, 2014 22:22:59 GMT
Yeah haha... not quite sure what it was meant to be. Maybe a song about gibberish at 2 am
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Post by warningsign42 on Mar 18, 2014 3:00:54 GMT
James, remember the song we said we'd write? I hope you like this. Feel free to add correct or change. <3 Close your eyes, and drift away Sail the ocean, all night and day The sky is full, full of stars Glowing... In the rain, Taking flight Comes a distant, blinding light Your heart will show The way you need to go What happens next only you know.. Your heart will show.. The way you need to go.. The way you need to go.. The way you need to go.. What happens next only you know.. With the new IOS 7.01, my notes section doesn't crash anymore so I can use it again . I ket your part in it without messing with it. I rewrote my bit though because the lyrics before were rubbish. Nice! I love that! Also "the sky is full, is full of stars" nice touch Just wrote this. Not sure what the point of the Icelandic title is, just though it sounded good. Stjörnur When we left you We were fighting ourselves And all these years The pain never went away But we fight for another day We lost our names For the heat of the moment Saved everything But we were saved for last of all In our dreams We are fighting ourselves And all these years We've waited for the chiming of the bells And all this rain That has built up inside Will be free from its hell Soon they'll open up the stars And we'll open up our hearts Soon...
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Post by comicforce on Mar 18, 2014 7:27:03 GMT
You two should get together and form a band.
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Post by spiderman on Mar 18, 2014 19:11:18 GMT
James the third verse is amazing! I like the imagery too. Paints a really clear photo. We keep telling ourselves that.
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Post by prissieb on Mar 18, 2014 19:49:39 GMT
Wow, I really love this thread. I am actually jealous of the creativity you all have. I wish I had only 5% of it.
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Post by spiderman on Mar 18, 2014 20:36:51 GMT
I'm sure you have well more than 5%!
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Post by spiderman on Mar 19, 2014 20:57:23 GMT
Here's a new one. About letting go remembering to live life. Dancing In the Rain
Blossoming the colors, as they come alive Watching the stars as they shine at night Don't you worry 'bout a thing We'll find something to believe in Just let it go, driving on off the road You don't have to feel the pain We'll go dancing in the rain
The summer's lighting the way As we lay lying awake So turn on the radio As the lights fade and glow The dog days are here And there's nothing left to fear
You don't have to feel the pain We'll go dancing in the rain
ooh..ooh..ooh..ooh
You don't have to feel the pain We'll go dancing in the rain
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Post by comicforce on Mar 19, 2014 22:16:56 GMT
NICE! I need the music to go with that one.
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Post by spiderman on Mar 19, 2014 22:39:02 GMT
NICE! I need the music to go with that one. I have a guitar part for this one. I'll try and record it when I get off from work. I would have earlier but I broke a string and had to replace it. Then had to leave for work. :P
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Post by LdySpace on Mar 19, 2014 23:01:02 GMT
Well, I don't have more than 5% for sure, but I do recognize talent, and this thread is full of it. (Talent I mean...)
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